From d76be862966d681060af377640406aeb5791099d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: robertl <robertl>
Date: Wed, 30 Apr 2008 03:01:14 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor doc tweaks for Destinator, EXIF, Vidaone.

---
 xmldoc/formats/destinator_poi.xml |  6 +++---
 xmldoc/formats/destinator_trl.xml |  2 +-
 xmldoc/formats/exif.xml           | 13 ++++++++-----
 xmldoc/formats/vidaone.xml        |  4 ++--
 4 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xmldoc/formats/destinator_poi.xml b/xmldoc/formats/destinator_poi.xml
index a6ee5976f..9cd439649 100644
--- a/xmldoc/formats/destinator_poi.xml
+++ b/xmldoc/formats/destinator_poi.xml
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 </para>
 <para>
   The basic information was found at <ulink url="http://mozoft.com/d3log.html">mozoft.com</ulink>.
-  We can read and write all fields described at this document. Please note that 'house number' isn't
-  supported as a separate field. This field, if available in source, will be stored together with 'street'
-  into our internal 'address' field.
+  GPSBabel can read and write all fields described at this document. Please note that 'house number' isn't
+  supported as a separate field. This field, if available in any source file, will be stored together with 'street'
+  into GSPBabel's internal 'address' field.
 </para>
 <para>
   <productname>Destinator</productname> by
diff --git a/xmldoc/formats/destinator_trl.xml b/xmldoc/formats/destinator_trl.xml
index d362ba79c..5b33dd4b9 100644
--- a/xmldoc/formats/destinator_trl.xml
+++ b/xmldoc/formats/destinator_trl.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 </para>
 <para>
   The basic information was found at <ulink url="http://mozoft.com/d3log.html">mozoft.com</ulink>.
-  In addition to the standard GPS track data (coordinates and timestamp) this format stores also
+  In addition to the standard GPS track data of coordinates and timestamp, this format also stores the 
   position fix and the number of satelites seen during recording. 
 </para>
 <para>
diff --git a/xmldoc/formats/exif.xml b/xmldoc/formats/exif.xml
index 44b54faf5..4d6958638 100644
--- a/xmldoc/formats/exif.xml
+++ b/xmldoc/formats/exif.xml
@@ -1,9 +1,12 @@
 <para>
-  With this format GPSBabel reads GPS information from embedded 
-  Exif (Exchangeable image file format) data. Exif is standardized and can
-  hold also GPS data. A good example for Exif information are camera information in JPEG pictures.
+  This format reads GPS information embedded in 
+   <ulink url="http://www.exif.org">EXIF </ulink>, 
+   the Exchangeable Image Format, data.  EXIF is a standardized method
+  of encoding data in pictures such as JPEG, TIFF, and WAV and is frequently
+  used by mobile phones with cameras, cameras with built-in GPS.
 </para>
 <para>
-  At this time this feature can be found in mobile phones with camera and GPS receiver, and other more
-  expansive digital cameras.
+  EXIF is frequently used for Geolocating photographs so their images can be
+  correlated with time and location.
 </para>
+
diff --git a/xmldoc/formats/vidaone.xml b/xmldoc/formats/vidaone.xml
index b3e39075e..8cf1447a6 100644
--- a/xmldoc/formats/vidaone.xml
+++ b/xmldoc/formats/vidaone.xml
@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@
   This format supports the <ulink url="http://www.vidaone.com">VidaOne</ulink> GPS for pocket PC GPB file type.
 </para>
 <para>
-  Here we have a very simple binary format which stores only the coordinates in the
-  tracklog (.gpb) files.
+  This is have a very simple binary format which stores only the coordinates 
+  in the tracklog (.gpb) files.
 </para>
-- 
2.30.2